You are going to teach English to your friend’s child. Write a letter to your past English teacher to ask if you can borrow some books from him/her. In your letter tell your teacher about the child. say when and where you will teach the child. explain what books you would like to borrow.

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Dear Ms. Mary, I am writing

this

letter to seek help from you as I would like to borrow some English books from your collection. I am Tessy, your formal student in the 2020 year batch. Recently, one of my friends approached me to teach her child English at their home because

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her child had an accident and sustained a left leg fracture. As she is at rest it would not be possible to go to school and

also

, she has a speech competition after a month. I have been planning to start classes

this

Friday and I will go to their home daily in the evening, which is more convenient for them. I have known your book collection in English from my school days.

hence

, it would be beneficial if you could provide me same vocabulary and grammar books,

also

I would like to borrow speech books, if you have any. I expect to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Tessa Jose

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

164 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are going to teach English to your friend’s child. Write a letter to your past English teacher to ask if you can borrow some books from him/her. In your letter tell your teacher about the child. say when and where you will teach the child. explain what books you would like to borrow.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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39.Some people think that young people should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Most people agree that money cannot be happiness. Why is happiness difficult to define? How can people achieve happiness?

Today people do less exercise. Some people believe that conducting sporting events such as the Olympics or World Cup encourage people to live healthy while others indicate that there are various other methods to remain healthy. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What problems are associated with this ? What solutions can you suggest ?