the graph below shows radio and television audiences through out the day in 1992. Summarize the finformation by selecting and reporting the main freatures, and make compraions where relevant.
The graph gives information about the differences in the number of people who watched TV or listened to the
radio
throughout the day in 1992.
Overall
, the top used device in 1992 was television, while
the radio
was used half as much.
Turning to the details, almost 30 per cent of British people used to listen to the radio
in the morning, which shows that they prefer to listen news only at the beginning of the day. However
, the number of radio
audiences is
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then
, steadily declined.
In comparison, the amount of television spectators fluctuated from 6 am to 4 pm and then
, gradually increased. At 8 pm this
quantity reached a peak with 50 per cent of viewers. Next,
since 10 pm it is obvious that TV showed a downward trend and hit the lowest point at 2 am. Between 2 and 6 am neither television,
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radio
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