Two maps show an Island, and changes that take place after construction of tourist facilities.

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The map illustrates how an Island is going to change in the future.

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, the place will undergo several changes, including the appearance of new facilities and new paths for tourists as well. Turning to the details, it is obvious that the current island is isolated and has only the trees

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the beach nearby. The sea has surrounded the place, which can be beneficial for tourists.

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, there is

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one beach on the left side of the island. In comparison, it can be seen that in the future a lot of structures will be built. A pier is going to appear in order to transfer people from the boats. Next goes the reception, where newcomers can check in and book accommodation. The restaurant is going to be located at the top of the map, behind the reception. The features that will remain the same are the beach on the left corner of the map and trees, which are not expected to be cut down

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

168 words

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Two maps show an Island, and changes that take place after construction of tourist facilities.

Organized tour to remote areas and community is increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for the local people and the environment?

If the product is good and meets consumer needs than advertising is unnecessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think parents should supervise their children's activities closely, while others believe children should have more freedom.

Some people think it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.