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IELTS Essay Transport Preferences Among Young People The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Essay Transport Preferences Among Young People The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph depicts transit choices among younger adolescents in 4 countries in a year. From an
overall
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 perspective,
cars
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 are the most common option for all countries with the notable exception of
France
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 where the youth prefers to ride bicycles.
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 motorcycles are the least favoured in most countries, bicycles are in
France
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. Use of
cars
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 in the United Kingdom and the United States had the same percentage(60%),
while
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 Italy had a significant selection for the use of
cars
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 as transport, In
France
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 people were more likely to use a bicycle (which was upper than 40%) rather than
cars
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(exactly 40%).
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 driving with motorcycles was not the trend among the 3 transport, so in the UK and in Italy less than 10% for travelling,
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France
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 was more than 10%. Bicycles were the second most used transit. 30% in the UK and 10% in the United States.
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 Italy had 12% usage bikes as transport

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