modern technology is changing our world This has advantages such as bringing people together through communication it also has disadvantages such as destroying differences between cultures To what extent agree or disagree ===========================================

It is generally accepted that our world nowadays has been changed by the development of modern
technology
,
however
,
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modern
technology
has both pros and cons effects. Some
people
believe that it can bring
people
together via communication,
while
others
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it may destroy the variety between cultures.
This
essay will discuss
these
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advatages
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advantages
and
disavantages
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disadvantages
of modern
technology
at some points. First of all, modern
technology
can connect users worldwide
due to
the invention of
internet
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. In the past, there was
limited
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a limited
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technique to connect
people
from different countries together as they
have
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to travel for long
distance
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to see each other or
sending
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paper
letter
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oversea
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. Thank to modern
technology
,
people
can use computer and
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internet
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to communicate with
other
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each other
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from
any where
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without travelling.
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, students who are studying in Australia are able to connect with their family at home or
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more relationships with other international students via social media.
By
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that way, they are not
felling
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alone
while
studying
oversea
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as well as
be
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able to communicate with other friends.
Secondly
,
on the other hand
, modern
technology
may break the variety between cultures. Without modern
technology
,
people
used to communicate with each other via their
traddional
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traditional
techniques based on their cultures.
For instance
, before the
appreance
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appearance
of
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internet
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, when a Japanese wants to
sent
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a letter with a
hand craft
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scarfe
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. It
proofs
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their respect
to
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other friends,
however
, using
internet
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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