The table gives information about the actual and predicted
for
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population
in Sao Paulo, Jakarta and Shanghai in 1990 and 2000.
As we can see from the information given, Use synonyms
that
Sao Paulo had the highest amount in both. Correct word choice
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While
Jakarta was the lowest. ShanghaiLinking Words
, was
fluctuated in the period given.
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Firstly
, Linking Words
Sao
Paulo, the actual Change preposition
in Sao
population
in 1990 was 15%, and the predicted Use synonyms
population
in 2000 Use synonyms
was
increased to 25% before Unnecessary verb
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decreased
to 18% in 2000.
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decreasing
Secondly
, ShanghaiLinking Words
,
was fluctuated between 12.5% and 17%. Started at 13.5% 1n 1990 Remove the comma
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while
the Linking Words
predected
was high in 2000 at 17%, Correct your spelling
predicted
then
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to 12.5% in Wrong verb form
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actual
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the actual
population
in 2000.
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Finally
, Jakarta, was the lowest between the two countries given, beginning at 9.5% in actual Linking Words
population
in 1990 Use synonyms
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then
the expected rise in 2000 to 14%, but the actual in 2000 was 11.5%.Correct word choice
and then