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an increasing number of people are choosing to have comestic surgery in order to improve their experience. Why do people have operations to choose the way they look? Do you think this is a positive or negative development

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Dear Ms. Diane, Thank you for your letter informing me that I have won the competition. I feel highly enthusiastic, and I am looking forward to the 'Teen Cuisine' experience.
Accordingly
, I am writing to you to ask for
further
 information about the cookery
course
. I do have a range of questions that I would like to enquire about.
Firstly
, I would like to know the exact dates, times and address of the upcoming
course
. I wonder if I have to bring anything with me. Honestly, I do not have my own special clothing or kitchen equipment.
Secondly
, you requested cooking experience, and in fact, I have never done a cookery
course
 before.
However
, we did have some cookery lessons at school
as well as
 frequently being engaged in cooking at home. In my point of view, it is one of the most practical factors that
improves
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 my cooking skills, being a steady basis for my own personal development.
Besides
, you mentioned placing me in the correct group, so I would like to be aware of which levels are available.
Furthermore
, I would appreciate it if you could inform me whether the
course
 has
its
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trainers, who will tutor and teach me how to make a wonderful meal, or all the learners must do it themselves by following the given recipes.
Lastly
, could you please let me know if students get a certificate
at the end
.
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 In case they do not, what could I be given after finishing the
course
? Thank you once again for choosing my menu as the winner, which I am extremely grateful for. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely,
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