The best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by providing at least six years of free education for each child, so that all children can read, write and use numbers.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that
poverty
is one of the biggest issues
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these
days.
While
it is a commonly held belief that we ought to
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years of free
education
for every child so they can read, write and
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with
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, to decrease
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poverty
in developing
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, there is
also
an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that a good solution for
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issue.
To begin
with,
education
is
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thing for every society in
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.
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, if we see every country that
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high
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rate of
education
, we see there
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poverty
problem on it.
In addition
, the main problem of
poverty
is the
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of knowledge,
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,
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a
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research that I read on a website "
Poverty
in Saudi Arabia in 1975 was 43%
however
after a massive
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movement
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movement
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movement
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95% of Saudi's citizens take
educatand
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educated
have a free
education
, the percentage of
poverty
dropped to 9%" Another point to consider,
education
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poorer
people
have a dream, and
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differently
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their future. It is
also
possible to say that, dreamer
people
can affect the country to help the community to improve her self. In conclusion, despite
people
having different views, I believe that schooling is
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crucial to our communities for the rich
people
and for the poorer
people
, and governments should make
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education
free for any poor child to support them and to solve
this
significant problem.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • literacy
  • numeracy
  • economic growth
  • skilled workforce
  • investment
  • employment opportunities
  • break the cycle of poverty
  • informed decisions
  • healthcare
  • infrastructure
  • access to technology
  • stable governance
  • challenges
  • cultural barriers
  • free education
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