The flow chart shows 'trampling', the negative effect of tourists walking in the countryside for the environment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The flowchart demonstrates how the ‘trampling’ can harm the environment in the countryside.
To begin
with, when tourists walk in the area, the grass is flattened. This
led to impacts: first,
vegetation was damaged, and second,
the soil became hard because of foot pressure. These made the reduction in air and water quality in the soil as well as
damaging the flora. As a result
, plants become weaker and plants are not able to reproduce and grow like usual.
Those things obviously will reduce the greenery. This
reduction is also
caused by increased erosion or water runs off the land. Finally
, all of those cause erosion and worsen the quality of soil and greenery.Submitted by erniwbs on
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