You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going to study in a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in a college Hall of Residence. Write a letter to the college. In your letter explain your accommodation requirements explain what your food needs are ask what alternatives are available if they cannot provide what you want You should write at least 150 words.
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a new student for the next
year
January intake in your Change noun form
year's
collage
. I will be studying computer science in your college and Correct your spelling
college
this
is a 2 years course.
During my study period
I would like to stay in your college Hall of Residence. I prefer to stay in a private single room. Add a comma
,period
Also
I heard that you are providing food for students Add a comma
,Also
on
the college accommodation. So I am planning to take Change preposition
in
foods
from your kitchen.
Is there any possibility of having Asian foods Fix the agreement mistake
food
from
your kitchenChange preposition
in
?.
BecauseChange the punctuation
?
,
I would like to eat rice and curry most of the time.
Please let me know the room availability and the food supply Remove the comma
apply
as
suit to my Change preposition
apply
requirement
.
If you can't Fix the agreement mistake
requirements
full-fill
Correct your spelling
fulfil
above
requirements, please let me know the options available.
Please be kind enough to pay your attention Correct article usage
the above
on
Change preposition
to
this
matter as
earliest Change preposition
at
convenient
.
Thank you.
Yours faithfully,
JhonReplace the word
convenience
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.