You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going to study in a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in a college Hall of Residence. Write a letter to the college. In your letter explain your accommodation requirements explain what your food needs are ask what alternatives are available if they cannot provide what you want You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am a new student for the next
year
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January intake in your
collage
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college
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. I will be studying computer science in your college and
this
is a 2 years course. During my study
period
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I would like to stay in your college Hall of Residence. I prefer to stay in a private single room.
Also
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I heard that you are providing food for students
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the college accommodation. So I am planning to take
foods
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food
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from your kitchen. Is there any possibility of having Asian foods
from
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your kitchen
?.
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Because
,
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apply
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I would like to eat rice and curry most of the time. Please let me know the room availability and the food supply
as
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apply
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suit to my
requirement
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requirements
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. If you can't
full-fill
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fulfil
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above
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the above
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requirements, please let me know the options available. Please be kind enough to pay your attention
on
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to
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this
matter
as
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at
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earliest
convenient
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. Thank you. Yours faithfully, Jhon
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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