The flow chart shows 'trampling', the negative effect of tourists walking in the countryside for the environment.
The flow chart demonstrates how the activity of the tourists walking in the grass can harm the environment in the countryside (trampling). The flow chart explains the destructive effects of the stepped plants.
This
reports 3 stages before the Linking Words
vegetation
reaches the impact. Use synonyms
Overall
, there are 2 major detrimental effects which are broken Linking Words
vegetation
and compacted soil.
Use synonyms
To begin
with, when tourists walk in the area, the grass is flattened. The first impact is, obviously, the plants are damaged because of the foot pressure, and the second impact is the land is compacted and hardened. Linking Words
Next,
the fact that hardened ground prevents the air and water from entering inside the Linking Words
vegetation
has led to a lower ability to reproduce and get nutrients to grow. Use synonyms
This
is Linking Words
also
caused by the damaged plants, which can lose their strength and become weaker to reach the sunlight and stand still.
After that, the reduction of air and water access to be absorbed in the ground increases the erosion risk. Linking Words
Moreover
, it makes the Linking Words
vegetation
reproduction lower. Use synonyms
Finally
, since it is already broken, it keeps the soil eroded Linking Words
as well as
influences herb infertility.Linking Words
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words vegetation with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reaches" was used 2 times.
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