the chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2022 and future projections for 2025. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2022 and future projections for 2025. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph shows Southland's income in
billion
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pounds for international
tourism
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, dairy
products
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and meat stocks exported
during
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between
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2000 and 2022, and indicates the future earnings in 2025. As we can see from the diagram, the first topic is about the profit of international
tourism
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.
Furthermore
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, within the years passing by the income is increasing from eight
billion
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pounds to less than 10
billion
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as a prediction for 2025.
On the contrary
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, the net profit for meat
products
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has dropped by one
billion
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in twenty-five years. 
Moreover
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, the
last
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topic allows a lower gain compared to both international
tourism
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and dairy
products
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.
Lastly
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, the sale of dairy
products
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is rising from 2000 until now
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, the prediction about 2025 is slightly negative as the income will reduce by half a
billion
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. In conclusion, the representation makes clear that the export of the majority of the goods will shrink in 2025
whereas
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, the trend is more positive for international
tourism
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words billion, tourism, products with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • trends
  • projections
  • categories
  • international tourism
  • dairy products
  • meat products
  • increase
  • decrease
  • significant
  • analyze
  • highlight
  • summarize
  • main features
  • comparisons
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