WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Many people in poor countries die from diseases that are curable because they cannot afford the medication required. Do you believe that drug companies should make their products available at reduced prices in these countries? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

Some of the African
countries
and Asian
countries
still are developing
countries
or they are undeveloped.
Due to
that, the
people
on
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in
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these
countries
having
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have
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low
income
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incomes
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and they are not receiving enough income to afford
for
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apply
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their
foods
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food
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. Because of
this
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,this
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they are not receiving enough food to maintain their health. Or they used to go for cheap food products.
This
caused to have weak immune
system
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systems
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among these
people
.
People
with weak immune
system
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systems
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are
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apply
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can easily
catch
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be caught
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by various diseases. Most of
dieses
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diseases
can be cured easily by having medicines. But the issue is the medicine for these illnesses
are
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is
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very high and those poor
people
do not have money to buy them. So they
try
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totry
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use cheap products or they are not taking any of these.
This
can
caused
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be caused
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to become
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the illness bad and they
are
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apply
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can
be die
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.
This
is what happening in
the
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poor
countries
. Most
of
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the
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apply
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people
dying
due to
a
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an
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issue
could
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that could
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be fix
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be fixed
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before. When we consider drug companies, they are selling products with high profit
margin
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margins
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.
That is
why most of the medicines are high in value. They don't care about the
people
dying
due to
this
issue.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • curable
  • medication
  • affordable
  • diseases
  • poor countries
  • access
  • treatment
  • humanitarian
  • responsibility
  • global health
  • initiatives
  • reduced prices
  • balancing profit
  • necessary
  • curable diseases
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