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People living in the 21st century have e better life quality than people who lived in previous times. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Most
people
 think that
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 in the modern era
people
 have made a lot of changes to make activity quality better,
instead
 of the centuries before that,
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 for some
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communities
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community
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 previous time was more peaceful and basic for living. On the one hand differences in the modern era make
life
 easier. There is a crucial increase in technology.
public
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are
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 always in contact with others for talks,
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 teaching skills have changed a lot,
although
 any not-changed techniques have been improved. Technological improvements
such
 as phones, navigators, systems, and robots, make it easier to solve problems, which means users can ask artificial intelligence what they want to know, without any conditions
as well as
 have an internet connection,
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now health issues can be solved rapidly
due to
 numerous drugs, vitamins, and technological devices for checking issues, It has become slightly easier for humans.
On the other hand
, the 21st century causes a variety of traffic all over the world,production of
the
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cars , the atmosphere is full of hazardous gases, and global warming another problem of the modern era. In the previous
century
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 there were not these problems at all, not too many cars, or smart devices. ,
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 society met and enjoyed and spent their time together. Kids played a number of outdoor games under the sun. At least there were so many smiles on
people
's faces, the stress level had been raised over the centuries. So
life
 wasn't to effortless as now but ,
still
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 there was a union between
people
. In conclusion, Most individuals believe that compared to centuries past,
people
 today have experienced many improvements that have improved the quality of
life
.
However
, for some
society
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,
life
 back
then
 was simpler and more peaceful.
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