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The chart below shows gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000,*20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant. Write atleast 150 words.

The chart below shows gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000,*20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant. Write atleast 150 words.
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Information regarding the total profit of primary exports in Southland during 2000, and 2023 and its projections in 2025 have been plotted in the provided chart.
Overall
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, the
export
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 of international tourism is the leading sector most of the time,
while
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 income for the
export
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 of meat
products
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 is always the least. It is quite clear from the chart that in 2000, International touristry was the chief
export
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.
However
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, at present, it is dairy
products
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. In 2025, international tourism is again expected to take the lead. In 2000, meat
products
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 that were worth 6 million pounds were exported from
this
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 area.
However
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, in 2020, a sharp decline of 0.4
billion
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 in the same commodity can be seen.
Also
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, it is set to decrease
further
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 to a point of 5
billion
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 in the next 5 years. Approximately 10
billion
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 pounds of dairy
products
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 are being exported from Southland, which increased by 3
billion
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 in comparison to the trading value of 2000.
However
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, by 2025,
this
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 value is predicted to decrease by 0.4
billion
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. Talking about international tourism, consistent growth can be seen in the
export
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 income throughout
this
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 period. It is anticipated to go from 8
billion
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 to 10
billion
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 pounds.
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