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got to school rushing because
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thought there was no time left, and
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was wrong there
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enough time haha, so my
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let me in the classroom and
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wore my
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went inside
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got my candle from my bag cause
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need it for later, after the flag ceremony we went to the stage
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did a prayer,song, and speech.
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, we took pictures,
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up our
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, and said our closing prayer.
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got back to the classroom sweating. it was so hot!
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after
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got inside the classroom, it was
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late but my
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said it was fine and let me
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copying some notes that were given,
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was doing my
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afternoon
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copied the notes
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we had a
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recess, cause it was recess time. took a
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did pretty
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four over four.
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mean it was easy. my
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let me go outside and the others since we got a perfect score. after my math
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let us in. IN
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MOOD so
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was in a hurry
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was scared lol.
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took a math
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passed. perfect, it
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. my science
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came and we took a
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was almost perfect but
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got 10 over 12 since mine was j, e when it was supposed to be e,j
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was so close
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was upset :(.
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a few minutes it was lunch break so we went all outside.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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