The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
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The chart shows the results of a survey about people’s
coffee
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and tea buying and drinking habits in five cities,
such
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as
Sydney
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, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart. If we take the information about fresh
coffee
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in the
last
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4 weeks, we can see Brisbane as the
last
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city that buys and drinks
coffee
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and tea with 34%
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Sydney
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has a percentage of 43%.
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, if we look at instant
coffee
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, Hobart has the percentage high with 54% and
Sydney
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with the lowest one, about 46%. In the end, the percentage of city residents who go to a café for
coffee
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is about 64% in Melbourne
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In Adelaide, people don’t like going to a café to take a
coffee
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with 48%.
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,
Sydney
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and Melbourne are the cities bigger, in , fact they have almost the same results
while
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others are a little bit different.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 85%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, sydney with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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