The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The chart shows the results of a survey about people’s
coffee
and tea buying and drinking habits in five cities, such
as Sydney
, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart.
If we take the information about fresh coffee
in the last
4 weeks, we can see Brisbane as the last
city that buys and drinks coffee
and tea with 34% while
Sydney
has a percentage of 43%.
Furthermore
, if we look at instant coffee
, Hobart has the percentage high with 54% and Sydney
with the lowest one, about 46%. In the end, the percentage of city residents who go to a café for coffee
is about 64% in Melbourne while
In Adelaide, people don’t like going to a café to take a coffee
with 48%. For instance
, Sydney
and Melbourne are the cities bigger, in , fact they have almost the same results while
others are a little bit different.Submitted by afiorentino404346 on
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