3.The line graph compares how much time it would take for three companies to manufacture a refrigerator in 1990 and 2000.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

3.The line graph compares how much time it would take for three companies to manufacture a refrigerator in 1990 and 2000.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The line chart below displays the
hours
that three companies need to produce refrigerators between the years 1990 and 2000.
Overall
, the
time
that companies A and C needed to create coolers dropped steadily over the entire
time
period
, and
company
B remained relatively stable.
Company
A at the start of the
period
required 30
hours
to make a refrigerator, and
then
it gradually reached around 22
hours
of fabrication per refrigerator, becoming the organization that needed the least
time
.
Company
C demanded the most
time
to make a cooler in 1990, with 35
hours
, during the 10 years the corporation decreased moderately the
time
to fabricate the product, finalising the
period
requiring approximately 28
hours
maintaining its longest
time
to produce.
Company
B began the recorded
period
with around 27
hours
required, ranking the
first,
with the less
time
needed to create a cooler, during the
period
between 1999 and 2000 it remained relatively stable, with a small fall, finalising the
period
with the necessity of just over 25
hours
for the creation, becoming the second least
time
required.
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