the diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugarcane. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The provided process diagram illustrates different steps of producing

sugar

from

sugar

cane.

Overall

, it can be seen that there are seven stages in

this

linear process. Commencing with cultivating

sugar

cane for 12-18 months in the field and ending with drying and cooling the

sugar

in the mill.

To begin

with, in the first

stage

, 12-18 months

old

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grown

sugar

canes

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cane

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are

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is

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ready to collect from the

sugar

cane field and

then

get harvested in the next

stage

by tractor or by

hands

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hand

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.

After

this

stage

, collected

sugar

canes

crushed

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in the machine to get the juice out, followed by purifying the juice using

limestone

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filter. During the next

stage

, heat is

being

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used to turn the juice into syrup by evaporating it and after that centrifuge

stage

where

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the

sugar

crystals get separated from the syrup. At the

last

stage

, by drying and cooling the

sugar

, it is ready to pack and sell.