The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the manufacture of carbonated drinks.
Overall
, the Linking Words
process
consists of five stages, beginning with the Use synonyms
water
cleaning and ending with the packaging at the supermarket.
First of all, Use synonyms
water
is collected from the factory for cleaning. In the Use synonyms
,
industry the raw Remove the comma
apply
water
starts to filter and inside the Use synonyms
,
machine some processes happen like Remove the comma
apply
water
softener and chemicals. Use synonyms
After
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this
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process
it has pumped. After finishing Use synonyms
this
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process
, commenced heating evaporation and carbonation Use synonyms
process
, the Use synonyms
water
goes into electric heaters and, when the heating case is finished, it is sent to the carbon dioxide machine via a colling pipe.
In the next stage, the Use synonyms
water
is transported to a mixing tank where the Use synonyms
water
is carbonated. The tank has some functions Use synonyms
such
as colouring,syrup, and flavour. Next, filter development began. Before the Linking Words
last
mechanism, the Linking Words
water
was filled into two types thing bottles and cans and Use synonyms
then
put into boxes both of them. Linking Words
Subsequently
, packaged boxes are transported to track for sale in supermarketsLinking Words
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