The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the manufacture of carbonated drinks.
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, the
process
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consists of five stages, beginning with the
water
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cleaning and ending with the packaging at the supermarket. First of all,
water
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is collected from the factory for cleaning. In the
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industry the raw
water
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starts to filter and inside the
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machine some processes happen like
water
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softener and chemicals.
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this
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,
process
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it has pumped. After finishing
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process
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, commenced heating evaporation and carbonation
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, the
water
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goes into electric heaters and, when the heating case is finished, it is sent to the carbon dioxide machine via a colling pipe. In the next stage, the
water
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is transported to a mixing tank where the
water
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is carbonated. The tank has some functions
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as colouring,syrup, and flavour. Next, filter development began. Before the
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mechanism, the
water
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was filled into two types thing bottles and cans and
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put into boxes both of them.
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, packaged boxes are transported to track for sale in supermarkets
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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