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Many people nowadays believe that studying foreign languages brings us many advantages. How far you agree with this opinion?

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There is no denying the fact that individuals think that learning another
language
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 will give them a
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benefits
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 it is a commonly held belief that there are a
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 of advantages to learning a foreign
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, there is
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 an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that studying other
languages
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 will give individuals a
lot
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benefits
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.
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 with, nowadays English is considered a universal
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 so it is necessary to learn it,
In other words
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, travelling will help you in many situations if you do not know the local
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,
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, it
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 will help to make friends which will give you a
lot
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 of
benefits
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.
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, they will help to know the beautiful places that only the locals know about. Another point to consider is that learning another
language
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 will help your memory to get stronger.
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 possible to say that it is good exercise for your brain especially if you have Alzheimer's,
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, it is a good thing to learn a
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 about a new culture,
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, if you travel to countries you have not visited it before it will help to explore the culture better because they will fill like you one of there own. In conclusion, despite people having different views, I believe that studying other
languages
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 is a significant thing, and all parents should realize that teaching children at a young age the two main
languages
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 which are English and Chinese
languages
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 plus their own will give them a
lot
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benefits
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 in there future.
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