the pie chart below show the number of native speakers of diffrent languages in canada in 1996,2006, and 2016.

the pie chart below show the number of native speakers of diffrent languages in canada in 1996,2006, and 2016.
The two pie charts display the percentage of native speakers in
canada
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in 1996,2006 and in 2016. the largest proportion of people use
English
as their native
language
and the rest were French and Non-official
languages
.the comparison during the
years
was almost the same. During 1996, 60
percentage
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of people's native
language
was
English
and it was the dominating
language
in all three
years
. 23
percentage
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of people use
french
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French
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as their native
language
and the rest of the
candian
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Canadian
Candian
population uses other non-official
languages
. even after ten
years
, more than half of the Canadian population uses
English
.The French-speaking community was around 21
percent
which declined slightly by 1
percent
and 20
percent
were non-official
languages
.
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2016,
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dominance
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Canadian
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the Canadian
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population was still there and French and non-official
languages
were the rest .the three pie charts clearly
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the
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English
dominance
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declined slightly by 1
percent
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every 10
years
and there is a growth in other
languages
simultaneously.
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