Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

In today’s world, there is a growing concern about crime

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in many countries. A lot of criminals tend to commit more crimes after being sentenced first time.

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essay will explore factors of re-offending and explain why rehabilitation and reintegration might be the keys

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overcoming

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issue. There

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might be a couple of reasons why

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is happening.

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, one of the main reasons is the lack of rehabilitation programs and the opportunity to retrain and learn new skills for the future.

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, after prisoners have completed their sentences, they do not have jobs and financial support from the government.

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, committing crime again is becoming

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way to survive.

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offenders may show an example

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culture of

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normal and may develop negative attitudes towards authority.

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for prisoners

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each other. To deal with

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issue, the

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priority is to take some measures to mitigate the problem.

For instance

, providing financial and psychological support for ex-criminals can help them get back

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society. When former offenders have a chance to reintegrate back

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social life and not be treated as

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, they are less likely to

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re-offend

. In conclusion, it is crucial to ensure that people who have been sentenced get the support they may need to turn their lives around. By doing

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, we can reduce the chances of

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committing more crimes again, making more

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for everyone.