Computers are becoming an essential part of school lessons. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is undeniable that

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computers

are becoming an integral part of school education.

Although

there are several drawbacks of dependency on

computers

,

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the benefits

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of them certainly outweigh those disadvantages. It is true that

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over use

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of

computers

in school classes can reduce interaction between

teachers

and

students

meaning that

teachers

can lose control over their

students

.

For instance

, research carried out by a University professor in Bangladesh shows that

students

are more likely to disobey their

teachers

when they are taught with the help of

computers

.

Moreover

, computer-led

lessons

are monotonous compared to teacher-led

lessons

.

Hence

,

students

may lose their concentration from

lessons

leading them to face potential threats of failure in formal examinations.

On the other hand

,

computers

have plenty of benefits. On top of that,

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and effectiveness of

lessons

are most noticeable. With the help of

computers

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teachers

can conduct classes effectively and accurately.

For example

,

teachers

do not need any pen or board to write as they are replaced by

computers

, allowing them to produce

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lectures.

Furthermore

,

lessons

with

computers

and projectors are very entertaining as

students

can enjoy videos, animations, and pictures

while

attending classes. In conclusion,

computers

have

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cons,

however

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advantages

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their advantages

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and affectedness of lectures are definitely more significant than

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disadvantages.