The line graph shows the number of people moving from rural to urban areas from 2000 to 2025.
The line chart provides the number of
people
who migrated from countryside
to Add an article
the countryside
cities
from 3 different countries namely Iran, Indonesia and Russia from 2000 to 2025.
It is clearly see
thatChange the verb form
is clearly seen
,
Indonesia has gradually Remove the comma
apply
increse
Correct your spelling
increase
increased
whereas
Iran and Russia shows
fluctuation throughout. Change the verb form
show
To begin
with, In the year of
2000 around 10 million Change preposition
apply
people
moved to urban areas and shows
Wrong verb form
showed
moderate
rise which Correct article usage
a moderate
is
30 Wrong verb form
was
milions
in the year 2025. In between 2000 to 2025 Correct your spelling
million
people
who migrate has slightly increase. On the contrary
, In 2000 there were almost 15 milions
Correct your spelling
million
populace
moved to metropolitan Correct your spelling
people
cities
and it Wrong verb form
is
was speedily climb
. Till Change the verb form
was speedily climbing
the
2010, Change the article
apply
Number
of Correct article usage
the Number
people
was almost 45 millions
. Even after Change to singular
million
the
2010 majority of Correct article usage
apply
people
moved from rural areas whcich
was almost 70 Correct your spelling
which
milions
in 2015. By the end Correct your spelling
million
od
Correct your spelling
of
the
2025, around 85 Change the article
apply
milion
Correct your spelling
million
people
migrated from Add an article
the country
country side
to Correct your spelling
countryside
cities
in Russia.
On the other hand
, Iranian people
was
the majority in all Change the verb form
were
the
three countries who moved to Correct article usage
apply
cities
from rural areas. The total number of people
who shifted to metrocities
was even below Correct your spelling
metro cities
atrocities
to
10 Change preposition
apply
milions
in 2000 Correct your spelling
million
while
it reaced
10 Correct your spelling
reached
milions
in 2005 which was upsurged around 50 Correct your spelling
million
millions
milions
in 10 years. Correct your spelling
million
People
who moved to cities
in Iran were at peak
by Correct pronoun usage
their peak
the
2025 which is just below Change the article
apply
to
100 Change preposition
apply
milions
.
Correct your spelling
millions
million
To conclude
, Majority
of Correct article usage
the Majority
people
who is
Russian and Iranian moved from Correct subject-verb agreement
are
countryside
Correct article usage
the countryside
whereas
Indonesia shows Correct article usage
a graduall
graduall
increase from 2000 to 2025.Correct your spelling
gradually
gradual
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