In the future, it seems more difficult to live on Earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching another planet to live, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the coming decades, it is believed that humans

would

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face survival problems on

planet

Earth. It is thought by some that financial

resources

should,

instead

, be utilized to check for the presence of life on other planets, like Mars. In my opinion, I strongly agree that we should investigate if life can be supported by multiple planets to address the growing issues of the

population

,

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and man-made disasters. First and foremost, owing to the ever-increasing

population

, there are not enough

resources

available for each and every individual.

This

is

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the

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discrimination, wherein countries and people have started fighting against each other for valuable

resources

like

fossil-fuels

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fossil fuels

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, or to assert claims on foreign lands for the same.

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, in the past, developed countries like the United States of America

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encroached on Iraq for taking control

on

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the petroleum reserves, in the name of fighting terrorism. Another key reason, leading to

such

a development is the need to have a secondary habitat in the event of an apocalypse. It is believed by many,

for instance

, that humanity will be decimated in the long run just like that of Dinosorous if natural disasters like

asteriods

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asteroids

or meteors strike on

mother

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planet

simulatenously

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simultaneously

.

Additionally

, it is believed that man-made

diasters

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like global warming and flash flooding can’t be avoided if staying on just one

planet

.

Furthermore

, finding a

planet

which can support the survival of mankind, can help ease the burden of natural

resourcs

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resources

resource

requirements to cater to

ever-increasing

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an ever-increasing

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population

. In conclusion, money should be utilized resourcefully to identify

for

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the existence of life on other planets to cater to the increasing difficulty of

rising

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the rising

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global

population

, and their natural

resources

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usage needs

while

at the same time

mitigate

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the increasing disasters happening on the

planet

.