Mrs Barret, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours each day. Write a letter to Mrs, Barret. In your letter suggest how you could help her say why you would like to do this work explain when you would will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barret My name is Sara and I am writing regarding your advertisement which was published on May 1st, you said need help for a few hours each day. I would be available to assist you next summer. I wanted to tell you about the ways that I can help you if you choose me. As an excellent cook, I would be able to cook your meals and

also

help you with other house activities,

such

as mopping the land and tidying up your house. In fact, I want to emigrate to an English country next winter, and as you are a native English speaker, I can improve my accent when I have a speak with you. Fortunately, my time from Monday to Friday is completely free from 9 to 5, and just at the weekend my family and I go to rural areas because of my parent's health, because they have to spend a few hours a week in an environment without air pollution. If you need more details about my personality, just ask me by email address, and I will answer you honestly. Best regards SARA ZARE

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