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Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

#libraries #waste #money #computer #technology #functions
Having libraries could be a waste of money and could be altered by computer technology. Maintaining libraries will only lead us to money exploitation. Even though, it has many information bestowed in it. Saving it from cells could be a tough task.
Moreover
, converting it into a digitalized form can make it easier to maintain and avail when we need it. Despite, wherever we are.
For example
, a person who uses a
book
 from the bookroom needs to visit the place and should search for it.After using it ,he should return the
book
 without any damage to it .
Although
 , there are chances that a
book
 could be damaged.In order to, prevent those
books
 from harm, we need to transfer those
books
 to a digitalized version.
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 so, we can access and avail the
books
 when we
need
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 .
In particular
,it is simple to stack
those information
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 in a code
and
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so
computer
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the computer
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 is
a
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 best option to replace
books
.
However
, using
in
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 a digitalized form could be
unhealth
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to
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 humans.In
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comparison
comparision
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comparison
,reading
in
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books
 was not.I believe that
,
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 reading through a screen , can only cause us
inabilty
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inability
to focus .
Therefore
, it makes us unstable in our work.
In addition
 to it, the rays from the screen can make us
loose
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 our
eye-sight
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. Following that,
siting
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on a chair and working on a lap can cause back pain over a period.
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the
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laptops are convenient to operate ,it is more harmful both
mentaly
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mentally
 and
physicaly
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physically
physical
.
On the other hand
, reading through a
book
 can improve our concentration and mental stability.
Consequently
, it
also
 improves our imagination ability.
Due to
 that ,
prefering
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preferring
 a
book
 could be more beneficial.
To sum up
, it is more convenient to read wherever and whenever we want
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 a laptop.
Although
,
i
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 think reading a
book
 can make us more skilled in doing a job, imagination and even more intellectual.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • repositories of books
  • promoting literacy
  • community engagement
  • equal access to information
  • digital divide
  • accessibility issues
  • personalized assistance
  • educational programs
  • cultural events
  • safe spaces
  • community meetings
  • tactile experience
  • preserving historical documents
  • important cultural repositories
  • fostering a sense of community
  • communal hubs
  • serene and focused environment
  • conducive to study and reflection
  • irreplaceable value
  • distracted environment
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