The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The

pie charts illustrate the percentage of people accessing the latest information, divided into five branches in

Canada

and

Australia

Overall

, the majority of Australians access

news

using online platforms,

while

Canadians access the latest information by watching TV.

Additionally

Canada

has a higher ratio of four branches to accessing

news

than

Australia

, which only occupies one branch.

Initially

, online platforms had the highest ratio of Australians used for accessing

news

(52%), followed by TV (37%).

However

, the lowest percentage is occupied by radio and not specified, with the same level at 2%. Accessing

news

with printed

news

Australia

and accessing

news

with radio in

Canada

have the same ratio of 7%.

Next,

printed

news

Canada

is twice as high as in

Australia

, at 14%. The majority of Canadians watch TV to get the latest information,

while

those who do not specify a platform for getting

news

are left behind, at 40% and 3% in a row.

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