The line graph below show the average monthly temperatures in three major cities

The provided diagram illustrates the percentage of average temperatures for each month across three diverse cities,

Paris

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,

Dubai

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and Sydney. The temperatures

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displayed in

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degrees.

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, it is clear from the line graph that

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and

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Dubai

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temperature

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significantly rose

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April to August

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in, contrast Sydney's temperature dramatically fell at the same time. Observing the details, it is remarkable that

Paris

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has a colder atmosphere than the rest two,

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started at 5

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in January

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gradually climbed to reach its peak at 20

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in July and remained the same in August

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dropped to 5

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again

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of the year.

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,

Dubai

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experienced both fluctuations of increased and decreased,

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began at approximately 18 Celcius surprisingly soared to 35

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in August and slowly fell to 22

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in December.

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, Sydney started around 25

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then

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met the reduction in July by 13

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and steadily rose to 23

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at the end

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.