The line graph below show the average monthly temperatures in three major cities
The provided diagram illustrates the percentage of average temperatures for each month across three diverse cities,
Paris
, Dubai
and Sydney. The temperatures is
displayed in Change the verb form
are
Celsius
degrees.
Overall
, it is clear from the line graph that Paris
and Dubai
Change noun form
Dubai's
temperature
significantly rose Fix the agreement mistake
temperatures
during
April to August Change preposition
from
while
in, contrast Sydney's temperature dramatically fell at the same time.
Observing the details, it is remarkable that Paris
has a colder atmosphere than the rest two, Paris
started at 5 Celsius
in January then
gradually climbed to reach its peak at 20 Celsius
in July and remained the same in August then
dropped to 5 Celsius
again at the end
of the year. Similarly
, Dubai
experienced both fluctuations of increased and decreased, Dubai
began at approximately 18 Celcius surprisingly soared to 35 Celsius
in August and slowly fell to 22 Celsius
in December.
On the contrary
, Sydney started around 25 Celsius
then
met the reduction in July by 13 Celsius
and steadily rose to 23 Celsius
at the end
.Submitted by munichpupil115 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words paris, dubai, celsius with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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