In spite of the advanced made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
There are many people all around the
world
that go hungry Use synonyms
while
numerous advancements are made in agriculture nowadays. The problem of Linking Words
world
hunger is caused by the unfunctional regulatory systems of governments and Use synonyms
also
the financial problems of society and Linking Words
this
enigma can be tackled by better observations of the Linking Words
World
Health Organization.
On the one hand, agriculture can provide many Use synonyms
countries
with their nutritional needs. Use synonyms
However
, the functionality of the providing systems is mainly unauthorized or only regulated by the governments which can be an issue. Linking Words
This
is because providing all of the population with proper care and food is a complex matter and can only be executed by the governments of Linking Words
countries
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In addition
, the family’s financial ability to purchase suitable food is Linking Words
also
another cause of going hungry in a country. Linking Words
For example
, in Ethiopia 3 out of 10 children was reported to have nutritional deficiencies in a survey by The New York Times newspaper.
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On the other hand
, WHO has made progress throughout the years by elevating the percentage of healthy children in some locations, Linking Words
nonetheless
, there are still many Linking Words
countries
in the Use synonyms
world
that cannot be supervised by Use synonyms
this
or any other force because of their responders. Linking Words
For instance
, in Afghanistan the reports of malnutrition in families are unclear and the numbers reported by the forces are not reliable to the international organizations.
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To sum up
, because of the lack of management the resources are not provided properly throughout the population and Linking Words
although
some of the hungry Linking Words
countries
are under the supervision of the WHO many others are still not observed by Use synonyms
this
or any official organization.Linking Words
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