The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Aisian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with prediction for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Aisian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with prediction for 2030 and 2040.
The graph above illustrates the previous, recent and the prediction proportion of the people living in several countries in Southeast Asia.
Overall
, by 2040 all people who live in every place will grow significantly compared to 1970.
However
, the growth might differ in each area. On the one hand, the most crowded place in 1970
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the Philippines nearly 30%.
Moreover
, it grew to almost 45% in recent years and
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to reach a bit over 50% in 2040.
On the other hand
, Indonesia has the lowest starting point compared to the Philippines, by only around 10%, but
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it will hit its peak by 2040 at just about 60%. By the end of 2040, three countries which are Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia, are predicted to have slightly the same amount of population approximately 50%.
Also
, their starting point differs a bit which is between 12% and 33%. After all, the population will increase gradually despite the difference
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in each country.
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