Some people believe that the best way to control accidents on city streets is to lower the speed limit, but others think there are better ways to improve the safety on city streets.

There is no doubt that

nowadays

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the number of accidents on the roads has been increasing in recent years,

because

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and because

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of

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, the majority of the community thinks lowering the speed is an option,

however

, I suggest that there are some other methods that need to be taken

along with

this

.

This

essay will analyse, how to manage the speed

limit

in some ways

as well as

provide other effective methods for society.

Firstly

, reducing the speed

limit

on city streets would help drivers

safe

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on

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the

harbor

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. As

a

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better control could be attained on the vehicles, the pace is less. In the case of

emergency

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, drivers are able to stop or handle their speed easily.

For example

, the speed

limit

on the city seaport is around 45-50 km/hour but during school hours, the speed

limit

is 25 km, travelling slower may save human life, especially children, as some of them always neglect

cautions

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when crossing the road.

Thus

, it not only keeps the drivers in control

their

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speed but

also

saves other lives.

Secondly

, there are many other ways to control road accidents

such

as assessing young people carefully by providing them a strict exams for their driving tests and raising the community's awareness about the danger of accidents when travelling on the roads.

For instance

, young people have to pass the learning theory practical tests under the supervision of an expert

provisioner

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to ensure they understand and are able to follow the rules.

Besides

this

, the caution of dangers should be set up along the roads to remind people. In conclusion, reducing the speed

limit

can avoid some unexpected incidents,

however

,

this

idea alone cannot satisfy the outcomes unless collaborates with other methods

such

as raising the community's awareness and assessing lower ages' driving tests strictly.

Hence

, when all these are implemented together they may bring the desired results.