The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
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The graph shows information about the consumption of
energy
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by fuel in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. If we look in detail, in 1980 the majority of consumption was three and they were obtained by Natural gas, Coal and petrol, with respectively 15,20 and 35.
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, between 1980 and 2030, these three sources have had an incredible increase because they are the main sources used in the USA. indeed, renewable
energy
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wasn’t used in the past and
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in the future and
this
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is very wrong. For ,instance Nuclear, Solar and Hydropower
energy
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in 1980 had all the same results at 4% but in 2030 we have a few increases in these resources because governments don’t invest.
To sum up
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, in the future petrol and oil will be the main sources in the USA with almost 50 quadrillion units
while
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hydropower is the least used with 3%.
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me, the best solution is investing in renewable
energy
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to avoid pollution and other problems.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Energy consumption
  • Renewable resources
  • Non-renewable resources
  • Fossil fuels
  • Nuclear power
  • Hydroelectric power
  • Solar energy
  • Wind energy
  • Biomass
  • Consumption patterns
  • Technological advancements
  • Energy efficiency
  • Sustainable development
  • Carbon footprint
  • Energy policy
  • Projections
  • Decade
  • Significant shifts
  • Economic factors
  • Environmental impact
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