The maps below show the changes in a school from 1985 to the present time.
The maps illustrate the transformation of a
school
between 1985 and now. Overall
, the expanded development focuses on buildings, the facilities and roads in the school
site.
In 1985, there was a large playing field that could easily go to the spacious car
park
connected by the road. On the left side
there were
a small Correct subject-verb agreement
was
car
park
and three school
buildings namely the office, the library and the classrooms on a line with the entrance. There was another building that had two levels that used to be classroom
block
in parallel with the exit and the Fix the agreement mistake
blocks
school
had 1500 students.
Nowadays, the number of students has risen by just over half. As the
result, some of the east Correct article usage
a
side
of the playing fields redeveloped
Add a missing verb
was redeveloped
another
Change preposition
into another
classroom
building side
by side
with a classroom
block that gets another floor. However
, the west side
constructed new facilities, specifically a pool, fitness centre and classroom
. The library modernised
Add a missing verb
is modernised
to
a learning resources centre and inside that there is a computer room. There is no longer a small Change preposition
into
car
park
in the west area but the office is still there. Finally
, the road connected to the playing area is converted to woodland and the car
park
is a bit smaller than before.Submitted by sidneynatasha16 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school, car, park, side, classroom with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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