The maps below show the changes in a school from 1985 to the present time.
The maps illustrate the transformation of a
school
between 1985 and now. Use synonyms
Overall
, the expanded development focuses on buildings, the facilities and roads in the Linking Words
school
site.
In 1985, there was a large playing field that could easily go to the spacious Use synonyms
car
Use synonyms
park
connected by the road. On the left Use synonyms
side
there Use synonyms
were
a small Correct subject-verb agreement
was
car
Use synonyms
park
and three Use synonyms
school
buildings namely the office, the library and the classrooms on a line with the entrance. There was another building that had two levels that used to be Use synonyms
classroom
Use synonyms
block
in parallel with the exit and the Fix the agreement mistake
blocks
school
had 1500 students.
Nowadays, the number of students has risen by just over half. As Use synonyms
the
result, some of the east Correct article usage
a
side
of the playing fields Use synonyms
redeveloped
Add a missing verb
was redeveloped
another
Change preposition
into another
classroom
building Use synonyms
side
by Use synonyms
side
with a Use synonyms
classroom
block that gets another floor. Use synonyms
However
, the west Linking Words
side
constructed new facilities, specifically a pool, fitness centre and Use synonyms
classroom
. The library Use synonyms
modernised
Add a missing verb
is modernised
to
a learning resources centre and inside that there is a computer room. There is no longer a small Change preposition
into
car
Use synonyms
park
in the west area but the office is still there. Use synonyms
Finally
, the road connected to the playing area is converted to woodland and the Linking Words
car
Use synonyms
park
is a bit smaller than before.Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school, car, park, side, classroom with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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