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The chart below compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001.

The chart below compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001.
The chart illustrates the percentage of
households
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 with different numbers of
people
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 in the UK in 1981 and 2001.
Overall
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, it can be seen a growth in the number of
households
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 with one or two
people
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,
nevertheless
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 in 2001 there still existed big
households
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 including 5 and 6
people
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 despite their falling. The
households
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 with just one person rose from 17% to 26% which was the highest change in total proportion,
in contrast
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, the biggest change in number was for the biggest
households
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 with 6
people
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, it decreased three times in 2001 from 6% in 1981. The other big
households
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 including 5
people
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 in 200 was 6% which is 2% less compared with the same number in 1981. The
households
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 with two, three and four
people
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 changed their proportion by 3%, but
while
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 the figure for those with two persons increased in 2001, the figures for those with three and four persons declined.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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