Task 1 You read in a newspaper that a company is going to renovate some school buildings in your local area that are in a poor condition. You would like to offeryour help. Write a letter to the charity paying for renovation. In your renovation -explain why you want to help with the renovations. -suggest what you can do to help -say when are you available to start work.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest in helping your charity work for the renovation of old school buildings in the Downtown area. I read in a local newspaper about
this
kind gesture by your company.
To begin
with, my urge to contribute some help in the above restoration effort, I would love to join you in the educational premises repair task because I had faced many challenges during my schooling due to
insufficient facilities, and therefore
, I do not want any student should come against similar issues.
In order to help your organisation, I would like to provide my voluntary work in the refurbishment of poorly conditioned school properties. I am an architect by profession, and I can assist with the designing of plans for renovation. Furthermore
, I would love to participate in charity drives around the city if possible.
However
, due to
work commitments, I would be available on weekends starting the next month for planning and guidance. Possibly, I may not be able to join during month-ends due to
the heavy workload at my office.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Ravindra RajoleSubmitted by ravirajole on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite