More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes, car and other items. Why is this trend? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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It is widely believed that nowadays, many
customers
tend to buy clothes, cars and other
products
that have hot
brands
.
While
people are more likely to buy
products
from famous
brands
more
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than other
brands
as these
products
are better than others, it has both positive and negative developments for the
customers
.
To begin
with, buying
products
from the most famous
brands
is a hot tendency. It is because
customers
, tending to follow top-tier
logo
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logos
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can affect not only finance but
also
competitive rates between top
companies
and common
companies
. In fact, many individuals buy goods from hot
brands
means that their
companies
receive a huge money from selling these
products
for
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citizens.
As a result
, other
companies
will try every marketing
stategies
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strategy
to upgrade their goods to reach the highest position.
For instance
, Apple is one of the top
Iphone
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iPhone
brands
that
hold
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holds
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a record every year;
however
, by changing phone styles and adding new programs in high-tech devices, Samsung is more likely to break
Apple
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record.
Besides
buying new items from famous
logo
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logos
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is a hot tendency, it has not only advantages but
also
disadvantages of
this
trend. First of all, buying hot
brands
of items
have
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has
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many benefits. One of the most important benefits is that these
products
can adapt
every
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qualities
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quality
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,
such
as durabilities, sources and
safeties
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safety
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. It means that every customer is not very strict and worried about
goods'
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the goods'
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qualities.
Therefore
, these
products
are more pervasive and useful in household chores or personal
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.
However
, it has some significant drawbacks
of
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buying these items. The most significant
disadvantages
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is that it can lead to pay disparities. It is because managers who represent
for
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their
brands
try to take advantage of increasing
customers
. A particularly good example here is that
Oreo
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the Oreo
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cookies'
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cookies
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brand
tend
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tends
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to reduce cream in every cookie from 100% to 50%, leading to increasing prices in
market
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. In conclusion, people tend to follow hot
brands
of
products
is an
enomous
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enormous
trend,
while
its negative and positive developments affect not only the
customers
' profits but
also
market
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the market
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, finance and competitive rate.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumerism
  • Brand loyalty
  • Investment
  • Aspiration
  • Trendsetter
  • Affluent
  • Mimicry
  • Conformity
  • Identity
  • Self-esteem
  • Status
  • Perception
  • Advertise
  • Promote
  • Influence
  • Peer pressure
  • Societal expectations
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