You have recently started a job in a new company.Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter, - Explain why you changed the job - Describe your new job - Tell him/her your other news
Dear Ali,
I have a piece of great news as I have recently received an updated job proposal from the company in your city. Truly speaking, I have lost faith in it, but the company's head-hunter contacted me via email and informed me that they are still interested in my participation in the project.
Mostly, I will have the same duties,
however
, my work schedule is much lighter than the current one. Linking Words
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the advanced salary, there is one assistant and a volunteer in my team, Linking Words
thus
I will not be overloaded with paperwork and no strict attendance time.
I want you to know that I'm getting married in a month or two so be ready to lead the ceremony as I'm going to assign you my best man. So, please, get an appropriate suit and shave your hipster beard. Just kidding, you are welcome in any outfit.
Email me as soon as you can, there are more things to discuss.
Your mate,
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Provide more details about why you changed the job, such as the reasons behind your loss of faith in the company.
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Use a more formal greeting and closing to maintain an appropriate writing tone. Avoid informal language, such as 'mate'.
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Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea or topic. The mention of your wedding should be in a separate paragraph.
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Provide more information about your new job, such as the company name, your specific role, and any unique responsibilities or challenges.
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Maintain a consistent formal writing tone throughout the letter. Avoid using informal language and joking remarks.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,