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You booked a exam این athe centre, but you find it not suitable to you. So you should a letter to the centre and send your request about chenge it to other centre. You should write Why is not it suitable for you Suggest the other place to replace

#exam #athe #centre #request #chenge #place
Dear Sir/Madam My name is Mansoure Hojatiyan .Thank you for your attention to
this
 matter. In fact , I booked my
exam
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 30 th of October in IDP
centre
 Asia, but after
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 time I
relised
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realised
that is
 so far from
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Taksim
square
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,
also
 I cannot
fing
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find
 a suitable hotel for my accommodation
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 the
centre
 .So , I decided to send a request to you if it is possible
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 my
exam
centre
to
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 IDP
centre
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 Europe in Istambul. Proudly ,if you accept my request ,certainly it would be more comfortable
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 me
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 because I will come to Istambul from Iran alone.
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, it would be grated to find
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 of
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 easily and it would
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of
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late
in
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exam
 time.
Finally
 , considering my conditions about taking
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 foreign country alone. I look forward to your prompt response. Faithfully Mansuore Hojatiyan
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that your introduction clearly states your purpose for writing the letter.
task achievement
Provide specific reasons why the current exam centre is not suitable for you.
task achievement
Suggest an alternative exam centre and provide reasons why it would be more suitable for you.
lexical resource
Use more formal language and academic vocabulary throughout the letter.
grammatical range accuracy
Check your grammar and sentence structure for errors.

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