The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph shows the
number
of enquiries
in one city received by the Tourist Information
Office about one person
, by letter, email or telephone
over a six-month period in 2011.
Overall
, the enquiries
received by the Tourist Information
Office between January
and Jun 2011. In particular
, the information
on person
and telephone
strongly increased, however
, information
on letters and email decreased.
It can be seen from the graph that, the information
about a person
is the shortest about 410 enquiries
but between January
and March
the Add a comma
March,
information
about a person
has a peak from about 410 to 800 enquiries
. However
, the number
of enquiries
has dramatically between March
and April from 800 to about 1250 enquiries
. After having a growth continuous between April and Jun from about 1250 to about 1900 enquiries
it was the highest in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
The number
of enquiries
received both letter and telephone
have difference. Between January
and February, both have a decline. However
, 4 months later both have changed different
. By Change the adjective
differently
telephone
had an increase between February and March
from 800 to 1000 enquiries
. Between March
and April, there was no change but had enormously from 1000 to 1600 enquiries
. On the other hand
, by letter or email
there was a reduction between Add a comma
email,
January
and May from about 800 to about 400 enquiries
but between May and Jun, the number
of enquiries
did not change.Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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