The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

The provided maps depict the information about the reconstruction of an airport in
coming
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year and how it looks at present.
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, it can be seen that more facilities will be added with
new
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trasportation
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transportation
system which will make the airport more convenient than now.
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gates will be doubled in the next year.
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with, on the
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there are check-in and a cafe before
security
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passport control room
currently
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.
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, It will be
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by changing the cafe area on the southwest corner and
bag
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drop area nearby,
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will be on the northeast corner and there will be some shops for the passengers after the security passport control room.
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, currently there is nothing after the control room for arrivals,
whereas
, in the future a cafe , ATM and a place for car hire is planned to
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there. In the present airport, there is a walkway for passengers but it
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remodeled
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to build
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train there for people. Meanwhile, there are eight gates for the passengers which will increase to 18 gates on
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both sides of the sky train line with two extended roads.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • terminal
  • car park
  • runways
  • redevelopment
  • proposed changes
  • expanded terminals
  • new gates
  • additional parking
  • amenities
  • navigation
  • environmental impact
  • economic impact
  • job creation
  • traffic congestion
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