Some people think that paying taxes is enough to contribute to the society. Others argue that being a citizen involves more responsibilities. Discuss, what is your opinion?

Some believe that paying

taxes

is the best way to build a better

society

, other people believe that social responsibilities should involve more than just paying

taxes

. In the remainder of

this

essay

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both points of view will be explored and a logical conclusion will be drawn

at the end

.

Taxes

are the source of resources

of

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for

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the

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apply

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governments worldwide and

trough

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through

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this

model many nations

are

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have

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achived

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achieved

good

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a good

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quality of life.

Firstly

, some countries have higher duties and their citizens expect that

this

money should be used to improve the conditions of

society

.

For example

, Estonia was a poor country in the 1900s, but the government decided to invest money in education and nowadays

there

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are

improve

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improves

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the quality of life of people. Clearly,

playing

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paying

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taxes

are

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is

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a successful model that

while

use

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correctly for

goverments

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governments

government

should

be improve

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the

condictions

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conditions

of life.

On the other hand

, certain societies found alternative ways to live within

society

.

To begin

with, some rural communities have used for hundreds of years

sytem

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system

base

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on group

colaboration

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collaboration

.

This

behavior

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is popular

between

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among

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indigenous communities.

For instance

, in Colombian

Amazonia

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Amazonia,

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the Embera people meet every weekend in order to work together on issues

such

as building a new school or hospital and in

this

way

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every individual can contribute to their

society

. What is more,

this

increase

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increases

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the links between members of the community So, community work is an interesting example of how we can contribute to

the

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society

with

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without

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out traditional concept of

taxes

. In conclusion, I

belive

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that paying

taxes

is important to maintain the

infraestructure

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infrastructure

and services of our

society

, but I admit that community work is an interesting alternative.