The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. write at least 150 words

The diagram depicts the

the

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present and the future map of a college building.

Overall

, it can be seen that the college architecture and map will

get

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completly

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completely

changed and the number of classrooms and

space

for the car park will be increased. First of all, the present entrance is in the north direction near the garden but later it is beside the road in the south.

On

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noticeable feature is the expansion of the college block, it will be extended to occupy the entire area of

garden

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the garden

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and

foothpath

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footpath

.

Consequently

, the

space

designated for recreational

purpose

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purposes

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, namely

garden

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the garden

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and

foothpath

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footpath

, will no longer be there.

Moreover

,

due to

the increase

of

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in

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the size of the

building

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the car parking

space

on the right will

also

increase and there will be

space

for numerous cars.

Last

but not least, there will be myriad shiftings of rooms. Indeed, the number of classrooms will

also

increase from three to five, but the size will be

diminshed

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diminished

. The reception can be seen as soon as crossing the entrance. The toilets and library will

also

be shifted but the lunch area and bus stop

remains

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will remain

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in the same position.

Also

,

opening

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the opening

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of a new shop will be done by the year 2025.