You need to take leave from your work for almost a month for some personal reasons. Write a letter to your Manager. In your letter: • Explain the reason for your leave & the length of your leave. • Explain how you intend to deliver the task that was given to you recently and has to be turned in in a week’s time. • Explain how & who will look after your work while you are away. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am

Lavneet

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Navneet

Kumar and I have been working in the R&D department since 2015. I am looking for a new design product development. I would like to request you to for a one month leave from 15th October.

Due to

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some personal issue with my health doctor gave the strict advice for bed rest so I want to leave for one month. Doctors told to me for a long time

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I was ignoring

this

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. I handed handover all the data to Ramesh, when I was not there all the projects and issues were looked at by them he knew of all of the things. I let her know the structure of the work and asked them to contact I am available on call or text at any time he has says questions about duties. I apologize for

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inconvenience and please understand

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is urgent. Yours faithfully,

lavneet.kumar45Mon Oct 02 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

152 words

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