Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some believe that healthcare professionals and

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need to be highly paid when compared with movie artists and firm chiefs in terms of their work,

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others oppose

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wages should be given

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the value of the work they imply to society and I agree that health sector

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and

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should get more salary than others. To embark on, certain groups of

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are doing their job not only for their benefit but

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for the community.

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as doctors and nurses have shown their importance to the public,

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, during the pandemic they worked without remembering their lives and most of them did their jobs without going to their homes in order to support individual needs.

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are the backbone of the school, where a child

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learns social values

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as helping others, working as a team and being kind to other

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.

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, the government should implement policies to support those

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rather than highly paid individuals. The authority has to analyse the risk and the amount of benefits preferred by each job category, to analyse how much salary to be given and

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should consider tax reduction for those

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at risk.

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, taking care of a patient with a communicable disease is more riskier than an actor who acts in a movie.

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, the government has to assess

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problem to prevent economic differences in a person, who experiences them in public. To recapitulate,

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who are important for society's development should be considered for high pay rather than other

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who hold positions and popularity. Only a child with good social value will become a liable person in the society, these can be attained only with the help of

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.

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certain types of jobs need to be considered.