Space exploration costs tax payers an exorbitant amount of money each year. What are the advantages and disadvantages of spending money on space exploration?

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In
this
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digitally advanced era, many countries are spending millions on space research, and
this
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amount mostly belongs
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the treasury of the
country
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,
that
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consists of money earned from taxes.
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these achievements in
astro-physics
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astrophysics
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to decode the unsolved questions of our solar system, it certainly does not solve any issue related
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the citizens. On the one hand, space exploration is an important landmark of the development journey for any
country
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in the
world
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, a successful mission, by these research organisations, plays
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role in solving the
mystry
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mystery
of the universe.
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,
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exploration becomes the pride for the nation that gets appreciated everywhere. The Mangal Mission of India,
for instance
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, was the only Mars journey which they achieved
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the first try, and it was welcomed by the whole
world
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, many regions of the
world
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need to focus on their internal problems on priority but the rulers of
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areas are
intereasted
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interested
in investing
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big portion of the budget
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exploring the stars. Though there is no impact on the nation's development after launching any rocket
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the sky, some governments are hungry
fir
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the
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respect from the
world
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,
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hard earned
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money of every citizen is getting wasted on
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useless experiments.
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, in Moscow, protests on
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large scale were seen when Russia
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their moon mission in July 2023 because
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the
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billions of
rubels
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rubles
rebels
were getting used for it during the war situation.
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, knowing the unsolved part of
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is an acceptable
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respectful achievement for the
country
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On the contrary
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,
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wecomed
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welcomed
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result is not going to improve anything for the citizens of that
country
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exorbitant
  • tax payers
  • technological advancement
  • scientific knowledge
  • economic growth
  • national prestige
  • long-term survival
  • financial investment
  • pressing needs
  • risk to human life
  • environmental concerns
  • space debris
  • immediate returns
  • allocation of resources
  • aerospace
  • engineering
  • habitable planets
  • breakthroughs
  • fuel industries
  • inspire
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