The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems

in six cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
table
decipts
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depicts
receipts
underpass railway system
informations
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information
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of different urban areas. The oldest underpassing railway infrastructure belongs to London
whereas
Tokyo has the largest commuters per
year
.
Besides
, The newly constructed systems have
comperatively
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comparatively
less range
overall
. London underground rail lines opened in 1863 and It is the longest route. It's travellers sum is under 1000 though.
Additionally
,
paris
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Paris
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has 1191
passengers
per
year
but Its route is under 200 kilometres. Tokyo has the largest number of people to carry per 12 months. It was established in 1927. There are some smaller
route
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and people carrying
train
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trains
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in the cities can be seen
also
. Though Washington DC is occupied by 126 kilometres of rail path, It shows only 144
passengers
, they contain yearly. Kyoto and Los Angeles are newer in
this
field having only 11 and 28 kilometers of railroad and only 45 and 50
passengers
in one
year
use the system. All the statistics of
passengers
in a
year
are counted in
milloin
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millions
million
.
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