The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
table decipts
underpass railway system Correct your spelling
depicts
receipts
informations
of different urban areas.
The oldest underpassing railway infrastructure belongs to London Change the wording
information
pieces of information
whereas
Tokyo has the largest commuters per year
. Besides
, The newly constructed systems have comperatively
less range Correct your spelling
comparatively
overall
.
London underground rail lines opened in 1863 and It is the longest route. It's travellers sum is under 1000 though. Additionally
, paris
has 1191 Change the capitalization
Paris
passengers
per year
but Its route is under 200 kilometres. Tokyo has the largest number of people to carry per 12 months. It was established in 1927.
There are some smaller route
and people carrying Fix the agreement mistake
routes
train
in the cities can be seen Fix the agreement mistake
trains
also
. Though Washington DC is occupied by 126 kilometres of rail path, It shows only 144 passengers
, they contain yearly. Kyoto and Los Angeles are newer in this
field having only 11 and 28 kilometers of railroad and only 45 and 50 passengers
in one year
use the system. All the statistics of passengers
in a year
are counted in milloin
.Correct your spelling
millions
million
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