Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that the biggest environmental problem nowadays is the disappearance of some specific

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of animals and

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others think that there are more important issues related to the environment. Personally, I agree with the latter and will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, the extinction of particular

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and animals has disrupted the ecological system, which means that different

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in the world are dependent on each other.

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, research shows that if a specific type of fish

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, it might lead to the death of some other types of fishes, which causes

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to the ecosystem.

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, some plant

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in danger of dying out

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in places that are prone to fire.

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, every year in Canada, several forest fires occur, which

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believed to threaten the existence of some kinds of

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that many birds and insects feed on for their survival. If these

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go extinct, the

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of many other creatures will be endangered.

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, the most alarming situation

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the environment is global warming and air pollution. It not only affects

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particular

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and animals

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may threaten human life on the planet. In fact,

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rising temperatures the polar icebergs are melting at an unprecedented rate and many countries are experiencing severe droughts.

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, some coastal cities might submerge

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a rise in sea levels and many countries might be forced to struggle with famine and starvation in the near future.

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, unclean air in big cities has caused many respiratory problems and diseases among residents.

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evidence shows that tackling

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serious issue should be prioritized over other problems. In conclusion, I believe that

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the loss of different

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of flora and fauna should be taken seriously, global warming and air pollution are much more pressing issues that we need to address seriously.