This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.

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The graph gives the recycling percentage of materials like

paper

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and

cardbord

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cardboard

glass

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container

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containers

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, aluminium cans, and plastics from the

year

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1982 to 2010.

Overall

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, from the given data we can understand that most recycled material is cardboard and

least

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the least

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recyled

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recycled

one is plastic. In the

year

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1982, only

glass

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containers and

paper

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were recycled and the percentage rate was 50% and 65%

respectivelly

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respectively

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, before 1986 and 1990 both

the

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apply

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aluminium cans and plastics started

recylcing

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recycling

at a low percentage rate (below 10%). The

glass

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container and

paper

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recycling faced a slight decrease before 1990 and later picked up the pace and started increasing. From 1990 to 2010, recycling of aluminium

can

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cans

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was remarkable and reached around 35%

whereas

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the

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plastic did not

made

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make

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any progress and still remained below 10%.

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, in the

year

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1994

the

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apply

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paper

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recycling was at its peak ( around 80%) and slightly started decreasing.

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during the same

year

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glass

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containers started

raising

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rising

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at a small pace and reached 60% before 2010.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words paper, glass, year with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

172 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

proportion
recycled
materials
increased
paper and cardboard
plastic
glass
metal
significant increase
relatively stable
fluctuating
period
starting
reaching
gradually increasing
remained low
experienced
showed
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There seems to be increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather tah than Continual assessments. What are advantages and disadvantage?

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?